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Violence
Contributed by
sammi3
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2011 @ 06:28:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Let the killing begin,
I bet this time, I will win.
As words will stab and hate will fly,
Actions will be made, feelings will die.
This mood so profound,
All sanity is gone, never to be found.
Losing all control of your actions, voices are silenced.
Are you ready? Because here comes the violence.
I'll hold you down, you'll push me around.
These homicidal thoughts are way too much.
Then time seems to stop,
And my head grows hot.
I feel the warmness of blood trickle down my head,
Now I haven't heard what you've just said.
My vision starts to fade,
Yet you won't regret the decision you've just made.
As my body grows numb,
I feel there's not much more to come.
Suddenly I see you standing over me, grinning.
With blood on your hands,
I now know where you stand.
You've lost it,
And you're sure about it.
You don't wanna stop,
You don't wanna hear me talk.
I close my eyes,
God please, just let me die...
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2011-10-02 18:28:33]
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Re: Violence
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by VioletSkies on
Sunday, 2nd October 2011 @ 09:53:18 PM AEST
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| That was just... Heart wrenching, really. Very well written, though. |
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Re: Violence
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 12:03:22 AM AEST
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| wow... if this really happened I hope you got out of there as fast as your legs could carry you. |
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Re: Violence
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by sammi3 on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 03:35:49 AM AEST
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| thank you and it wasn't a real situation haha it's what i felt. but thank you again(: |
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Re: Violence
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 03:44:25 AM AEST
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| this was something! i really thought this happened to you! you have talent. this was perfectly written, and put together. |
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