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99
Contributed by
Barries
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Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 01:28:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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99
have eyebrows man
look the other way
maybe take the highway
one sorry as highway man
always better than the best
it makes me want to hurl
never interrested in the rest
he thinks he is Don Curl
swept up-higher-higher-higher
reached the end on a whirl
climbed still higher
on a ladder with a curle
breathtaking splendour
for the only suvivor
is it well deserved ?
he stayed on the road that curved
he saw all that no one saw
even the man who chocked a saw
the cow that jumped over the moon
eat moon cheese with a silver spoon
the boring journey back
sense of control that lack
just another poor boy
whom found his hearts joy
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Barries
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2011-10-03 01:28:21]
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Re: 99
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by alicewhite on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 04:46:05 AM AEST
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thankyou for commenting on my lyrics.
I thought id have a look at what you have posted, and they are both good but i really like this one imparticular. Its very deep and i can really relate to the hidden meaning implied. |
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