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Jesus Tries
Contributed by
Butterat_Zool
on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 07:45:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Jesus tries
to come back home
come back home
my god
Jesus tries
to see the world
see us
as we are
Jesus tries
to let us know
let us know
hes there
Jesus tries
to make it show
show us how
he cares
Jesus tries
to create good
and visits now
and then
Jesus tries
but its too much
our hearts
cant handle him
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Butterat_Zool
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2002-08-03 19:45:42]
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Re: Jesus Tries
(User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 04:31:48 AM AEST
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Isn't that so true. Wonderful piece, whether it came from your head, or from something in the breeze... Great write!
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Re: Jesus Tries
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by Butterat_Zool on
Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 03:23:24 AM AEST
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| Just so you get a feel for what this one sounds like, I'd like you all to kow that this song is almost eight minutes long. Very sad indeed. |
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