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BRIDGES
Contributed by
angelabella
on
Wednesday, 5th October 2011 @ 05:33:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I stand on the bridge
Half alive
And bleeding inside
My thoughts spinning around
No other direction
But Hell
Masked men
Passed through me
And every time I shatter
Like porcelain I break easily
But they don't mind me
And I once again
Left alone
Alone in the damn bridge
Where damnation is my friend
And them masked men
Are my enemies
My silent foes
I grieve not for them
I grieve for my soul
It goes nowhere
But here...
Inside a hopeless flesh
Which goes nowhere but hell
Hell...
Her life is full of hell
And bridges too
Bridges that are endless
But goes where?
To Hell?
To Life?
It goes nowhere but here
Copyright ©
angelabella
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2011-10-05 05:33:39]
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Re: BRIDGES
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 5th October 2011 @ 06:46:34 AM AEST
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| I feel her pain. It runs more than just skin deep |
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Re: BRIDGES
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by alwong on
Wednesday, 5th October 2011 @ 07:51:30 AM AEST
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Hi, Angellabella,
"Happiness and sadness are the real human's lives, like the unstable waves moving up and down. I felt your pain beneaths in your heart!"
Good write, go on to write...
I would come again to read your poems! |
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Re: BRIDGES
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 5th October 2011 @ 07:59:09 AM AEST
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| Well written. Full of depth and character. Very readable. |
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