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Contributed by
Martin89
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Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 12:50:46 PM in AEST
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You are the pill that helps me sleep at night
and the first thought as i awake
You are alway here beside me
Even if the sea and land keep us apart
You are the one person i thrust
And the only one that i need
Your love is the potion to these new feelings
That have control over my heart
You are the one i want
Beside me as i lay on my bed
Waiting for my life to slip away
But i shall always watch over you
Through the good times and the bad
And as you take your final breath
I promise i will be there waiting for you
MT
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2011-10-06 12:50:46]
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Re: You
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 04:14:39 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Well I'd say you already have the hang of it.
Sad but great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: You
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 12:46:28 AM AEST
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| heh I think you may have meant "you are the only person I trust" rather than thrust. :) Regardless, this isn't bad at all for the first one you have ever written :p I enjoyed it. |
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