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Big Fish
Contributed by
xanvier
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Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 06:39:27 AM in AEST
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abstract
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i caught a very big ocean fish
i went home to tell my sister Trish
to whom i love, dearly and cherish
and yet still she was sick and famish
i prepare the fire and extinguish
i set the table with sushi dish
but before we eat, we pray and wish
so that our hunger would be banish
the table set up was distinguish
my fragile sister was astonish
exquisite by a gentle garnish
this is something that to accomplish
put it together with some radish
after we ate, hunger had vanquish
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Re: Big Fish
(User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on
Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 04:03:56 PM AEST
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'Big Fish' is a very wonderful-ish poem. It squish me and establish newish English. Felt no anquish. Would never banish nor varnish. All in all, a delicious poeish. Don't ever reliquish. Promish?
[Did you ever eat a knish?]
This verse won't vanish -- I'll remember ish.
--FlintHunter
Contributed by xanvier on Friday, October 07 2011 @ 06:39:27 AEST
Topic: Abstract Poetry
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