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Malice in Wonderland
Contributed by
ravenoktober
on
Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 08:55:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Ive reached the point of no return,
Stop trying to bring me back
Ill fight you the entire way
I dont cut any slack
Dont try to drag me into Oz
It will never work
Ill kill the Munchkins and the witch
I swear Ill go berserk
Cotton candy fires,
Gumdrops sticky red
Sugarplum grenades
On a gummy bears head
I left Pooh to starve,
I killed Bambis mother
The villain of all fairytales,
Snow White and every other
I left behind the fiction,
No longer what I need
Theyll say they chased me out
With Bambi in the lead
I wonder if they miss me
In Never Never Land
At least Ill be remembered,
The croc who stole Hooks hand
Copyright ©
ravenoktober
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2011-10-07 08:55:38]
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Re: Malice in Wonderland
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 09:28:35 AM AEST
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| A bit agresive but nice |
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Re: Malice in Wonderland
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by thefacade on
Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 04:17:43 AM AEST
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Actually a good poem. After sifting through some of the worst poetry on the internet, I find something interesting, finally.
Keep posting, hey. |
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Re: Malice in Wonderland
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 01:21:19 PM AEST
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Quirky and unique, with a sinister underbelly.
I liked it, it has an unusual quality about it.
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Re: Malice in Wonderland
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 03:14:07 AM AEST
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| cool and imaginitive, wasnt too sure when i started reading it, but glad i pushed through to the end. |
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Re: Malice in Wonderland
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 01:19:01 AM AEST
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| this is really good. i liked it. well written. it's unique. |
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