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Heavenly Hades
Contributed by
ravenoktober
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Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 05:06:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Jaded eyes grown tired of seeing
Battered body weary with being
Bleeding ears sick of the screams
Tortured mind, nothings what it seems
Searching hands, black with ashes
Nothing left, I grab the matches
Destroy everything to see the light
Pretend its normal, but nothings right
Convince myself destructions the key,
A beginning in ending all I see
Watch as the dust flies away
Im left alone, its best that way
Nothing to ruin, nothing to lose
No need to read their cryptic clues
Sick of a constant struggle to do right
I give up on this impossible fight
Watch the paint blister, blacken, peel
A shimmering fantasy, nothings real
Ever changing, never the same
Ive found a home, in the flames
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ravenoktober
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2011-10-10 05:06:18]
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Re: Heavenly Hades
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by xanvier on
Wednesday, 12th October 2011 @ 10:34:02 AM AEST
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i like your poetry the way they rhyme scheme but they are not
syllable pattern... nice and beautiful poetry... |
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Re: Heavenly Hades
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 12:58:49 AM AEST
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| perfectly done! i agree with it. this poem is so true! i live it! you have talent. |
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