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Contributed by
trisha
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Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wish I wasn't here
I hate my life
Nobody cares
Nobody did
So why am I here?
I go to the kitchen
Pick up a knife
Then think quit
Should I stay
Should I just let it be?
I hate my life
I hate my mother
I hate my brother
Do they care
Or don't they bother.
I hear someone coming
Then I look it's my daddy
The one I love.
I tell him what happend.
He tells me they love me
He tells me they care
As I listen I put down the knife
Then I hear a voice it's his wife
Then I ran to her hugged her
I hope I never try and leave again
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trisha
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2003-04-30 19:05:00]
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Re: Leave
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by Sexygirl on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 07:08:22 PM AEST
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| I hope you don't leave .....you know the ones that love you will be very hurt by this....well written....take care.... |
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Re: Leave
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 12:01:47 AM AEST
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| That was good and sad too. Nice writel |
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Re: Leave
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:15:10 AM AEST
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This is very good, though sad. I hope that your friend is feeling better now.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Leave
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by AngryPrincess on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:25:35 AM AEST
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| cool beans |
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Re: Leave
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by spooky on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 07:05:59 AM AEST
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| sometimes its better to express how you feel then doing something thast the family would regret,,loseing a loved one as you,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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