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untitled
Contributed by
ichiban_girl
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Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's my birthday, hooray, hooray
I finally turn nineteen today
But in all my years what have I learned
I've loved, lost, cried, and even yearned
Yearned for freedom to get out on my own
But somehow i always come back home
But now my eyes are cleared
From the tears of pain and joy
I am living my life, no longer a toy
To be played like a babydoll
Now my world isn't so small
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ichiban_girl
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2003-04-30 20:05:00]
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Re: untitled
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by norm on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 09:48:14 AM AEST
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your poem is great...look what you
have to look foward to when you're
twenty one |
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Re: untitled
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by OrionsFate on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 03:34:41 PM AEST
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| I love the short,to the point poems like this,especially expressed as nice and articulate like you have done here. Very well done. |
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Re: untitled
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by OrionsFate on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 03:34:50 PM AEST
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| I love the short,to the point poems like this,especially expressed as nice and articulate like you have done here. Very well done. |
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