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Tangibly Uncondensed at 7:10
Contributed by
stateofgray
on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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The misty substance condenses
My eyes focus its lenses.
A dream, oh so very much I want
Its epiphany to me even greater than any teaching of Kant.
Standing in front of me is reality-behold!
Taunting me to cross the threshold.
I find myself surprisingly cool, calm, collected.
Im frozen, leaving my dream momentarily neglected.
I cannot believe its standing right there
Surreal, but real, down to the last hair.
I am succumb in a delirium of agony and joy
Thought struck Finally, I am a lucky boy!
The reality of my dream is teasing
Telling me to join it, sounds incredibly pleasing
But for some reason as I walk, I stop.
Motionless I mused the fact I reached the elated top.
I marvel at my dream
Suddenly, its sullen, it seems.
The dream is pointing its wrist, and a tick tocking clock appears from the sky
My Dreams tangible reality starts to say bye.
Im baffled-The door is closing!
What is the universe imposing!?
I run frantically after the closing door.
I run and run, but time seems to slow me down, and I run no more.
My dreams are running away from me
I dont why, I dont see
Perhaps I am blind
betwixt truth and lies in mind.
I get on my knees and cry!
I hold my hands to the sky and ask why?
The Universe responded , dying, and said you wasted too much time standing still
And now you know the walking proof to a cosmic bill.
Beaten on the ground , to whatever, I beg
And in the midst, a spastic kicking starts at my leg
The tick tock of a clock descends from the sky again
And the alarm clock rings-its 7:10.
Maybe it was just a lesson.
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stateofgray
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2003-04-30 21:25:00]
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Re: Tangibly Uncondensed at 7:10
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:35:12 PM AEST
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very good write ... maybe a lesson is to be learned here
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Re: Tangibly Uncondensed at 7:10
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by kittiekat on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 04:30:20 PM AEST
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| I think it's a lesson, and i like how you flowed the words from sentence to sentence. Plus! The rhyming was great! >^..^< |
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