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Indescribable
Contributed by
Anopenheart
on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 02:10:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can't find the words
because there aren't any
of enough magnitude
or with immense meaning enough
to even attempt
to describe
this way I've been feeling
this thing I've been experiencing
in my mind
in my heart
in my soul
It doesn't have a name
or definition
or even exist as something tangible enough to be completely understood
But I do know this
It comes from a place where pure faith exists
complete trust
and undying love
it is a gift
not one given all at once like something brand new
but instead
it's something already posessed
just not yet discovered
not yet uncovered
until now
And its discovery, it's uncovering
not the feeling itself
is the gift
and with it's discovery comes strength
and hope
and love, lots of love
but most importantly
a peace
a kind of peace that will blanket this feeling, protect it, and keep even the smallest grains of doubt and fear from covering it back up. Its presence becomes permanent
Again, there are no words
none at all
for this
So if you've been blessed enough to have discovered this feeling yourself,
then everything i've just said
makes perfect sense
And you know that there is honestly nothing more I could possibly say
because that is all there is
that is everything
that's it
Copyright ©
Anopenheart
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2011-10-19 02:10:08]
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Re: Indescribable
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by Anopenheart on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 05:24:28 AM AEST
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| I realized after posting this that I probably should have put this entry under a different topic. While it does deal with emotion, the feeling im attempting to describe stems from a religious/faith standpoint. also, when I asked you to comment to see if you could understand the the feeling Im trying to describe, I want to make sure you all know Im not asking you to guess, im asking if there is anyone out there who has experienced anything like this in their own faith and if so, let me know if I succeeded in my attempt to explain it. Its an incredible revelation for me, and Im looking for people to share the amazement with! Thats all! Thanks! |
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Re: Indescribable
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by xanvier on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 07:03:57 PM AEST
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"the truth about the heart of the love", in for which sometimes we wonder what is all this we feel, the Indescribable we feel about things, or someone that we know has this feelings, it is God's gift to us and we make sure that we treasure this Indescribable feelings to anyone we love or fear, we feel joy or happy, we feel sad or sorrow, the insanity in our head becomes to much if we get to much of this the "truth about the heart of the love", i don't know if all this make sense to you... i just express the words as i read... nice and beautiful poetry...
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Re: Indescribable
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by cathartic on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 08:30:24 PM AEST
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| unfortunately, i dont even think you know the "feeling" you are trying so painfully trying to describe. either figure it out before you start to write or i suggest getting a diary. in a diary you a free to express unamed feelings. however, i did enjoy the form of the poem.. the words seemed to be shaped like arrows. on some level thats what encouraged me to keep reading. hha haha better luck next time(: |
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Re: Indescribable
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 04:31:38 AM AEST
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| unfortunately sometimes the English language (or any other language) fails to capture the immensity of how we are feeling. The only way artists have found to describe this "feeling" is through creation of art. So you are on the right track. :) I know what you mean when you talk about this feeling, and it really is the most wonderful thing you can ever feel. It is like feeling the wind of freedom, or the call of truth. Ahhhh but I am rambling now. This was a lovely poem, telling us that some things... are indescribable. |
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