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call me crazy
Contributed by
ravenoktober
on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 04:59:29 AM in AEST
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Psychotic,
Insane,
A lunatic,
Deranged
I answer to all these and more
I look human, but Im not;
In a straightjacket, rocking on the floor
A twisted human, a dysfunctional robot,
Yet I hide all of this well
Total madness seems like a quirk
It doesnt look fragile, this crystal shell
Near constant struggle, but theres a perk:
I blend in with the clueless herd,
Who carry the true insanity
Who manage to lie without a word,
Conceal the truth from vanity
They think its clear,
But the line is hazy
A lie; all they hold dear
And yet they call me crazy
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ravenoktober
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2011-10-19 04:59:29]
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Re: call me crazy
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by Anopenheart on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 05:55:18 AM AEST
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| nice job. i like this a lot. short lines, and still a powerful message. well done! |
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Re: call me crazy
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by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 06:01:39 AM AEST
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| your far from a nutter your just you, be you, peace |
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Re: call me crazy
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by xanvier on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 06:29:33 PM AEST
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| i like the way you appeal to the world that we are living in, it's crazy alright... i know... nice and beautiful poetry... |
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Re: call me crazy
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by cathartic on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 07:22:48 PM AEST
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| congratz! you managed to keep my attention long enough for me to read, almost half way through it. well done. probably the best poem ive read so far on this site. |
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