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I'm sorry
Contributed by
cheygal10
on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 01:02:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm sorry but these feelings will never end
and my heart will never mend
I just need to cry
and end it with a sigh
The tears never fall
As I sit in the dark hall
Cutting my wrist
As I get even more pi ssed
I cant do this again
I know it's a sin
It's the only pain that will stay
Now here I start to lay
My face is turning white
My head Is getting light
Now my eyes rool back
But where am I at
am I in the ground
What was that sound
I hear falling tears
My familys fears
But I can do nothing now but stare
All this black they wear
I can't help but want to cry
but all I can go is sigh
...Now I am dead
But the last words I ever said...
I'm sorry but these feelings will never end
and my heart will never mend
Can't this just be done
I need some teenage fun.
To bad I'm dead and all alone
I still hear my family cry and moan
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2011-10-19 13:02:07]
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Re: I'm sorry
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by cathartic on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 07:01:38 PM AEST
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| not all poems have to rhyme. infact, the rhyming made the poem painful to read. i'm sorry. better luck next time. (: |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 04:21:17 AM AEST
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troll strikes again! (see above) lol but anyways, I thought this was an expressive piece and it described the rationality of cutting yourself very well. Most people that cut themselves are not trying to kill themselves, but just want to feel something, and unfortunately this sometimes leads to death.
nice poem. |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th October 2011 @ 04:15:09 PM AEST
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| this was perfectly done. it was exactly as if you really experienced the whole thing. it was touching. write poems the way you want to! it's your poems! so what if you rhyme?! people really should learn how to express their feelings! or keep their mouth shut!! keep up the excellent work! |
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