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Victory Dance
Contributed by
Splatteredaisy
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Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Oh Dear God, I'm wounded. Black swirls. Am I curved? Am I shaken? Beat me. Kick me. Enjoy it while it lasts. It's on your head. It's on you conscience. I'll have my victory dance. Black swirls. Dancing around. Chaotic scars. Chaos, Then...Peace. Love me too much to let me keep going. I'll have the last laugh I'll have my victory dance. Black swirls. Twiddling around. Haunt your souls. I'll have my victory dance. Black and Blue Black and Blue You can't see me but I can see you. The truth about you. One day will come back. And I'll have the last laugh. I'll have my victory dance.
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Splatteredaisy
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2003-04-30 23:45:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Victory Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by lilch4ever on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 11:55:16 PM AEST (User
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Good poem and nice write. |
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Re: Victory Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by CarrieLynn on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 04:40:33 PM AEST (User
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Your poem is great. It is like saying a lot without saying too much and I like that about it. |
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