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What If
Contributed by
ariesnf
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Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 08:14:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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WHAT IF SOMETHING TRADGIC WAS TO HAPPEN TO me ,
WOULD YOU BE SAD AND CRY OVER my FINAL RESTING PLACE?
WHAT IF i WAS TO FALL ILL,
WOULD YOU CARE FOR me AND MAKE me WELL AGAIN?
WHAT IF i WAS TO WALKED OUT OF YOUR LIFE AND NEVER TO LOOK BACK,
WOULD YOU MISS me AND WANT me TO CHANGE my MIND?
WHAT IF WE NEVER HAD THAT CHANCE MOMENT WHEN WE MET,
WOULD YOUR LIFE BE ANY DIFFERENT FROM WHAT IT IS RIGHT NOW?
WHAT IF AT THE MOMENT OF my CREATION NOTHING HAPPENED,
WOULD ANYBODYS LIFE BE DIFFERENT?
WHAT IF....
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ariesnf
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2011-10-20 20:14:57]
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Re: What If
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by cathartic on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 08:59:43 PM AEST
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| the fact that this poem was written in caps made it very hard to read. please consider writing with your caps off. also, you mispelled a few words.. luckily it did not take away from the poems meaning. however, i was left with the feeling of "SO WHAT?" as opposed to.. "oh, what a lovely piece of work". better luck next time (: |
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