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how could i wish to love you
Contributed by
praz
on
Saturday, 22nd October 2011 @ 09:18:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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well, on the next play
high hopes appears in a clay
shinning sun so high
but don't know where it lies
on warm sand , feet burns
the dream but it all ruins
so now what you have say
stresses causing the crack in a day
green fileds of happiness
calling tha dry land of sadness
cold breeze cover lovely valentine
steel rain sketching the heart line
garden of loosing thoughts
blossoming the bleeding cause
i just want to get paused
how could i wish to love you
we are just two aouls of heaven and hell
i know this love would not end
now tell me how could i wish to love you
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Re: how could i wish to love you
(User Rating: 1 )
by Banda5k1 on
Sunday, 23rd October 2011 @ 05:22:00 PM AEST
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| Eh I like some nonsensical poems that play word games or make me take a different view of reality, but this just seems to be too nonsensical, at least in my opinion. |
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