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Your Name
Contributed by
BigMike
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Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
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Everyday I write in memory of you-
And get at the enemies of me and you-
And it all comes back to you-
So if I have a son I'll name him after you-
If you were here I know you would be proud-
But now you're above me sitting on the 9th cloud-
And I wish history could change-
So I could at least know your name-
So you could see your youngest son achieve fame-
Up close and right here-
But all I have are thoughts that keep you near-
I got some issues that I need to resolve-
Dad I miss you, when I think of you my poetry evolves-
Slowly changing my flow-
Watching my resume grow-
And I keep growing-
But your youngest son grew up without knowing.
Copyright ©
BigMike
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2003-05-01 01:45:00]
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Re: Your Name
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:05:28 AM AEST
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This is so sad and touching. I knew my father but he recently died and some of the confusion and anger I think you may be feeling - I feel too but for different reasons.
A truly great poem and a wonderful expression of emotion.
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Re: Your Name
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:34:05 AM AEST
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very good poem
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Re: Your Name
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:22:05 AM AEST
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AHHH I know this feeling with my mom!
So touching really hit me! Christina |
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Re: Your Name
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by AngryPrincess on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 12:51:20 PM AEST
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very touching, its too bad you never knew him...great poem
Lindsey |
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Re: Your Name
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 11:28:59 AM AEST
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| Sad And Touching :( |
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Re: Your Name
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 12:46:40 PM AEST
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| These "confusions" of parenthood are becomming commonplace now so many mixed/amalgamated families. A poem like this warns of troubles to come |
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Re: Your Name
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:10:48 AM AEST
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Hi BidMike,
lovely, very moving,heart felt.
i think he knows.keep up the good write. |
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