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~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You see the rapture of the morn spread slowly upon my face, As the gentle dawns reflection through the window I embrace. Such languid sighs as we have shared still echo in my heart, And I pray my God preserve our love, that we may never part.
I come to you, my heart in chains, my soul upon its knees, Bound forever by your eyes and captured by your pleas. Memories they tantalize, like flames from darkened coals, Of impassioned touches that we shared to quench our longing souls.
And through all exists the promise of a future yet untold, While the essence of the dreams I share, in reality unfold. For in you my vision is quite clear, like night turned into day, As I lay my body next to yours, my heart will never stray.
By: Doug Morton http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: ~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 06:42:46 AM AEST (User
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This is just so beautiful. I could feel a shiver going up my spine as I read it. wow!
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Re: ~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 07:21:46 AM AEST (User
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I've read this so many times ... it is such a simply beautiful way to say "i love you" ... absolutely devine ... Jan |
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Re: ~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:05:20 AM AEST (User
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Exquisite
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Re: ~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:17:00 AM AEST (User
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So many ways to say but this really was great!
So romantic!
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Re: ~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 12:04:03 PM AEST (User
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mmmm this is so romantic! ahhh! i love it! hugs nessa |
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Re: ~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by razorbladerose on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 01:48:39 PM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful write! And i love the way your words wrap so nicely around each sentence |
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Re: ~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 01:56:34 PM AEST (User
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Made me feel quite young again and that takes quite some doing
Back to the happy days of yore when I was busy wooing
Alas what was a raging tide, is now become more mellow
and I no longer seem to be "an interesting
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Re: ~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:23:37 PM AEST (User
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your words are beautiful...as usual...you show love woderfully...
hugs
kara
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Re: ~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 04:36:43 PM AEST (User
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Doug, this is a wonderful declaration of your love...
Jenni |
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Re: ~*~ Through All Exists The Promise ~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lia on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 01:51:02 PM AEST (User
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OOoOOoOh
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hehe this is purdy purdy and sensual...love it Doug |
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