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I hate You
Contributed by
Trisha
on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why do you
Treat me like this
I hate you
The things I do four
You.
I hate you
I miss you more
I hate you
I need you more
I hate you
I need another chance
I hate you
Why can't you see
What your doing too me
I hate you
I know you want me
I hate you
You know you have me
I hate you more
Copyright ©
Trisha
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2003-05-01 07:35:00]
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Re: I hate You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 07:59:15 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. Great heart-felt write.
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Re: I hate You
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by JamesHowlett on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 10:29:29 AM AEST
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| Nicely written. |
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Re: I hate You
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by exiled on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 03:49:33 PM AEST
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Why do you women put yourselves through that kind of torment? I know what your saying here experienced it myself. I really like this and believe it to be raw emotion.
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Re: I hate You
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 05:55:30 PM AEST
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Trisha,
I think that this is your best poem yet. It really expresses the raw emotions that are laying just beneath the surface. I can relate with how you are feeling.
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Re: I hate You
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by spooky on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:12:36 PM AEST
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| why bother,,if he hasnt realized it yet he probly wont,,sorry,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: I hate You
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 07:48:32 PM AEST
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| cool beans |
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Re: I hate You
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by Jaima on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 06:14:46 AM AEST
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| i love the contrast in this poem really good work...*smiles* |
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