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The Exception
Contributed by
kcrysten
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Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 08:22:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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LIfe is no roller coaster
Its not even a car ride
And no, its not brisk strides through the neighborhood
Or even a fully rested morning rise greeted with sunlight
Roller coasters are for people who find joy in their life
Car rides are for people who seek gratification
Walks are for people who have reason and purpose
A blissful rise from sleep are for people without any cares at all
But I'm, like others, the exception
From the happiness obtained in life
With self pity acting as my joyfulness
And hatrad pretending to be my serenity
Instead, my life is a racist brawl
It's even a huge cartel
And yes, its certainly contamination of lands and oceans
Or even a war of nations
Brawls are for people with no love in their soul
Cartels are for people who cant find true satisfaction
Contamination is from people who have no sense of value
And war is for people with no self worth
This is where exception lies
This is what it signifies
Hopefully, opposite of how the saying goes
'Everything that falls will rise'.
Copyright ©
kcrysten
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2011-11-01 08:22:26]
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Re: The Exception
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 07:08:09 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great writing and very thought provoking.
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emy |
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Re: The Exception
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 11:27:03 AM AEST
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yes
thought provoking indeed
I like the way
it comes together as I read it
well done |
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