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Sad
Contributed by
kittiekat
on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hold this feeling inside
So dramatic and empty
Inside I'm pouring teardrops
Letting myself drown in them
But I can no longer hold these
Tears of saddess
I burst into tears
Hours of eternal crying
Showing everyone how I feel inside
Hollow with diminution
I dismount myself in sinking
Into the tears
Drowning
With no air and no where to go
I descend to the bottom
Covered in tears
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kittiekat
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2003-05-01 09:35:00]
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Re: Sad
(User Rating: 1 )
by Metalmouth666 on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:37:18 PM AEST
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this is a great poem, very deep and touching I hope that you wont feel this way very long...
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