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I'm a fake
Contributed by
kaceyshell
on
Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 08:42:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Green eyes, pain hiden from everybody else
Like a stain nobody can see
A simple smile hides my frown
Ever beguiling
A shine added to my eyes
It would make your spine shiver
A glow to my face
Hidng the blow to my heart
And I seem happy
Oh!
So sappily in love
But had I taken off my fake perfection
I''d have crystal tears
Appearing and then gone
I''d have sorrow so deep
Weeping all night
But not a soul saw that
I controlled, made sure
except you
And look who!
Who gave up on me
Paving yourself into every inch of me
Then leaving...
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kaceyshell
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2011-11-03 20:42:32]
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Re: I'm a fake
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by emystar on
Friday, 4th November 2011 @ 12:23:34 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Remarkably writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: I'm a fake
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th November 2011 @ 08:48:27 AM AEST
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| i'm sorry you were hurt. your writing is deep. you know how to express yourself perfectly. i can't hide my emotions. whan i feel something - everybody knows it. i tried to hide it when i was working because i didn't want to lose my job - but it was so hard. i wish i could make you feel better. unfortunately - you need to take one day at a time. time doesn't heal wounds like people say - but time does make you stronger to handle it better.when you feel the need to cry - do so. crying helps you alot.i always feel better after my crying spells. |
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Re: I'm a fake
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by DjFreshmatic on
Friday, 4th November 2011 @ 04:31:55 PM AEST
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| Great write! |
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