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your not alone
Contributed by
spooky
on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sleepless is the child,,
who wonders through the nite,,
searching for the things he needs,,
searching for you,,
can't seem to find the switch,,
to turn the lights on,,
hopeing that mommy and daddy will be there,,
can't reach it,,
can't find mommy and daddy,,
wondering through the house,,
he trys to find someone,,
someone who tell him good-nite,,
or even give him a glass of water,,
no one there,,
he sits there and cries,,
not loud,,but a soft whim,,
where is my mommy and daddy,,
where's my big brother,,
no ones there,,
he finds his way back into his room,,
crawls back in bed,,
hides his head underneath the blankets,,
crying himself to sleep,,
no one comes in to see him,,
the man wakes up,,
see's things diffrently,,
he's not a child anymore,,
he got use to being alone,,
not by choice,,he wanted his family,,
now that he's has a family,,
he doesn't desert his children,,
as his parents did,,
he has learned from them,,
to cherish the child,,
craig s. meeks
Copyright ©
spooky
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2003-05-01 13:35:00]
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Re: your not alone
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 01:49:15 PM AEST
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Oh Craig this was so touching,I couldnt imagine being that lonely!
Great work! Christina |
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Re: your not alone
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 01:49:46 PM AEST
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very beautiful and from the heart
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Re: your not alone
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:15:53 PM AEST
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| truly beautiful work |
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Re: your not alone
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 06:22:05 PM AEST
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| wonderful write craig, we learn a lot from our kidhood, so sad though your little child, hugs nessa |
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Re: your not alone
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 06:25:51 PM AEST
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A stark glimpse into somebody elses world.
Thank you for making me appreciate how fortunate I have been. |
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Re: your not alone
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by shelby on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:33:43 PM AEST
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oh this is so touching. Once again another well done poem. Your such an artist!! Im glad too hear your cherishing your child!!
Michelle |
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Re: your not alone
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 08:09:49 AM AEST
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This is so sad and so touching. I love the fact that it ends on a positive note though. Great writing!!
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