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Power Steering
Contributed by
duff
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Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 06:02:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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A diagnostic future
Of take away clouds
And Percocet waves
Give pain a makeover
Leaving bullets and
Patience alone to
Test drive his will
Copyright ©
duff
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2011-11-07 06:02:50]
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Re: Power Steering
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by ming on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 09:07:36 AM AEST
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Wow! Brillant and scary all together! Give us more!
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Re: Power Steering
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 09:36:59 AM AEST
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| 'Power Steering' is a dynamic poem. I'm not quite sure what it means -- I think it's about someone in a lot of pain who has to test his will against the pain without the use of medicine... If that's it -- then I hope whoever is ill will be better soon. The poem is a monster! It demands attention. Riveting. Piercing. There. --FH |
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