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impressions
Contributed by
essential
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Tuesday, 8th November 2011 @ 09:36:28 AM in AEST
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Remarkable how leaves grow for month
But I only see them fall
It's like a person being silent
And when he whispers you hear him call
It's like the first light after darkness
That I misjudge cause it is pain
And the end of summers drought
I cannot cherish cause it's rain
It's like the dam I know is there
I only hear it when it breaks
And my heart that served so long
I only feel it since it aches
So am I misled by my impressions?
I cannot see what isn't shown
Like the leaves I just see falling
And I ignore for month they've grown.
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Re: impressions
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by lisasolorio1 on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 12:46:03 PM AEST
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I do like the style of your poetry. This one I like all the way to the end. I can almost feel what your describing.
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