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YOU KNOW IT'S TRUE
Contributed by
RockRoss
on
Saturday, 12th November 2011 @ 12:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There's noting to fix between
Me and you,
Everything is broken
And you know it's true,
So don't try anymore...
Let me go
With just a "Bye",
With just a look of a corner eye...
There's nothing to say or do
Between me and you...
We said to much,
But you left untold
The most important thought.
And you know it's true
There's nothing more to do...
For me is hard,
But I can't read your mind...
Though sometimes I thought I could,
Later on I saw,
That everything was just a show.
You've seen my heart,
But you didn't care
About how your sharpen words,
Could hurt me there.
But I'll leave away from here,
And you'll feel better within,
You'll see again the rising sun,
You'll laugh and have a lot of fun,
And I'll do the same,
You know it's true
And in the end I'll be for you,
Just a little fog,
On your sailing journey to the port...
Copyright ©
RockRoss
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2011-11-12 12:53:33]
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Re: YOU KNOW IT'S TRUE
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by NightOwl61 on
Saturday, 12th November 2011 @ 01:02:12 PM AEST
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| sometimes its just time to call it a day and move on. The write's pretty effective, but the last three lines seem unnecessary. Enjoyed. tfs |
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