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Hate me
Contributed by
aulakh
on
Wednesday, 16th November 2011 @ 05:45:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Hate me
hate me hate
yes i am bad boy
o! every one please hate
what i am doing here
i should go like a mink
in dark cave
there sadness in my wait
hate me please hate
everybody watch at me
like a stranger
o god! call me
why do you doing so late
hate me please hate
your departure gave me
some tears and grief
lose and more lose
in my fate
hate me please hate
Copyright ©
aulakh
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2011-11-16 17:45:25]
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Re: Hate me
(User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on
Thursday, 17th November 2011 @ 07:42:11 AM AEST
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| 'Hate Me' is your best poem yet. It is great the way you carry the theme all the way through. I feel sad because of what you say -- but I know you say it from your heart. So it's true. But I don't hate you. I like you very much! --David |
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