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No such thing as a love poem
Contributed by
norm
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
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How can there be a poem 'of love'
with all the words like 'moon above'
When we all know that loves a pearl
that's shared between a boy and girl.
How can others read this poem
between these two who've found a home
where love is nurtured, rhapsodized
and can't be seen by prying eyes.
These two in need of solitude
to grow their love with amplitude.
So strong a bond between the two
cannot be shared by me or you.
So you see, to public make it
stresses, forces, surely shakes it.
About a love that's just for two,
There cannot be a poem for you.
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-05-02 03:35:00]
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Re: No such thing as a love poem
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:13:10 AM AEST
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I do like the poem but I have to say that I don't agree with the contents. The poem is well written and flows nicely though.
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Re: No such thing as a love poem
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 08:18:02 AM AEST
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good write...but like sleepless_siren i do not agree with the contents..you can capture and bring the reader into your world for a brief moment in time
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Re: No such thing as a love poem
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by norm on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:05:51 AM AEST
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like it says in the beginning...
how can you argue with me? HAHA |
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Re: No such thing as a love poem
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by shelby on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:27:28 AM AEST
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well written. I believe a moment of love can be captured in words however....... I wont argue with you any further than than one statement, lol.
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Re: No such thing as a love poem
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:07:18 PM AEST
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| hmm.. well, my 'love poem' is over for now.... however, i like how you did this and it's cute:) hugs nessa |
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Re: No such thing as a love poem
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by norm on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 09:27:36 AM AEST
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go write your love poem...I was only
kidding. There are great examples
of true love ballads
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Re: No such thing as a love poem
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:27:01 AM AEST
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No 11 of the next 10, no that's wrong it's got to be No 1 of the second ten or....no 11 of the first 20............ But only 20 ? Surely I will read them all...............
Well if all of them disagree with you on this one.......I DON'T, meaning I think you're right,
and it's well written.
And after all......one doesn't walk down the street together shouting "Look we're in love!" in fact if one sees a couple making a public show of themselves one tends to find it very off putting.
(well my wife does.) |
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