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Innermost Thoughts (part 1)
Contributed by
Shadowman
on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2011 @ 06:06:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Winds howl and Thunders Crash
as the hour of Exodus approaches real fast
Approaching with the speed of an runaway train
the thought alone seems to cramp my brain
Is it really of me to go on farther?
Should I give up this dream and stay a little longer?
These same dreams Ive had since months end
Would I really give them to help a friend?
What should I do, What should I say?
How can I make the pain go away?
The pain that surrounds and the fears that abound
around my heart its stress is wound
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Shadowman
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2011-11-23 18:06:57]
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Re: Innermost Thoughts (part 1)
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by shelby on
Sunday, 27th November 2011 @ 02:27:11 PM AEST
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A well written and honest poem. I think many of us can relate to these feelings these days, must be riding the wind.
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