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So I don't matter ...i know that
Contributed by
Jilli_bean
on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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**please read this poem slowly...line by line**
who is that person
the one that looks you in the eyes
empty and cold
with blonde hair swaying in the wind
being tinted gold in the afternoon sun
on top a cliff
they used to have spunk
used to have a talent
words to them were art
nothing more, nothing less
It was their world
an escape
something better
when they couldnt face themselves anymore
who is that person
associating with everyone else
no one cares
it didn't seem noticable
so thier talent slipped into oblivaon
with no way to express
darkness began to reign
the ugly past reared its head abruptly to present
history once again was repeated
it was all bottled up
thoughts,feelings,emotions
all kept inside
who is that person
that person who was once a little girl
happy, naive
she was a dreamer, she was
then cruel reality kicked in
although there are moments
sitting alone , or hanging with friends
pure happy, is less but still sweet
she still sits
around
talent gone
scorned and lonely
pitty wants she not
nor sorry for her
be you dont
confusion is what consumes her
who is that she
cowering back into former friendly blackness
sarcasm was considered sersious
she snapped
writing was her life
taken away it was
and so, her sanity
to far gone into an illusion
she jumps
Copyright ©
Jilli_bean
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2003-05-02 07:35:00]
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Re: So I don't matter ...i know that
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by cryingonmyporch on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 09:53:40 AM AEST
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It is very verynice. And your right it does cheat them out of life.
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Re: So I don't matter ...i know that
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by zeroelysium on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:38:25 PM AEST
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| great one 4 big "hell yeahs" for you |
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Re: So I don't matter ...i know that
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by stargazer on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 05:46:00 PM AEST
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WOW... for once, I am completely speechless. I... I don't know what to say. I read it slow, several times. It makes you wonder you know? About life... about people who seem so friendly and so sure about life. It makes you think, so she could write but what is there to write about when you have nothing left to live for? And its scary... what will happen to the girl when she goes home tonight?
**I'm being serious Jill. Don't let yourself plunge.**
One question... do you like this poem?
Amy |
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Re: So I don't matter ...i know that
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by Jilli_bean on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 05:52:50 PM AEST
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| what do u mean? ...do i like that poem ...yes ...i do ...but its to truthfull think ...besides the suicide part...it was about me....slipping ...u know feeling like i just couldn't write anymore ...b/c my gift was gone...and with it ...my sanity ..u know |
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Re: So I don't matter ...i know that
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 05:33:37 PM AEST
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excellent, i love it:)
@->>->>- |
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