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softly pounding
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
on
Thursday, 24th November 2011 @ 01:55:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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i trick a deadly track
down a rocky road
all those memorys flood back
like a river ,a heavy load
the ground stirs in a snowy light
falling too summer night
my own true love to take this weight
but the hours turning light
a rainbow seems grey
in the still hush of the day
raindrops trickle to tears
but a sunrise nears
birdsong is distant mind
smile forgiven but unkind
if today didnt turn trouble thought
twist of fate all i find
i would have sought
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2011-11-24 13:55:11]
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Re: softly pounding
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th November 2011 @ 03:37:06 PM AEST
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I found it hard to get a rhythm but I loved the construction and the word choice. Very nice.
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