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Maybe ever one is hurting ..but its because of me
Contributed by
Jilli_bean
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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and it feels like
everyone is just like me
and it feels like
no one sees the way i see
and it feels like
everyone is hurting
and it feels like
its because of me
and it feels like
they try to help
and it feels like
they fail miserably
and it feels like
I can never be truthful, for fear I might hurt the one who hurts me
and it feels like
I am becoming what ever one thought
and it feels like
I am losing me
but maybe
its me?
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Jilli_bean
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2003-05-02 08:05:00]
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Re: Maybe ever one is hurting ..but its because of me
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by stargazer on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 05:34:18 PM AEST
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Holy... Jillian, absoutely amazing! Where do you come up with this stuff? You know I am your BIGGEST fan and ALWAYS will be. Remember that. We are two in a million, the two of us. Don't ever lose your touch and never lose sight of who you are. Don't let anyone mix you up in the crowd.
Now about the poem... the way you repeat yourself, it real emphisizes the fact that you are changing and growing up and you aren't sure what the change is and if they are to the blame. And then in the end stated so simply... 'but maybe, its me.' So short and simple but so deep and intricite. Defiantly one of your best yet.
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