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Dead Inside
Contributed by
kirstin
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I try to ease my mind
But my feelings
I'm unable to find
I can't decide
I can't confide
In the only one who cares
I need time
To come up with some more lines
More excuses
And again I cut myself to pieces
I'm seeing what it takes
To cut through the lies, the feelings
The pain
A mental hit, my mind takes again
Then, I'm dead
Inside
Copyright ©
kirstin
... [
2003-05-02 12:05:00]
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Re: Dead Inside
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by Jilli_bean on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:36:54 PM AEST
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dont ever worry about what someone says about your work...its yours for a reason...i really like this poem ...it reminds me ...of how I used to be...out of control..and dead
GOOD JOB |
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Re: Dead Inside
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:00:58 PM AEST
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This is excellent! Love the line "And again I cut myself to pieces". Great write! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Dead Inside
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by Lone_er on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:05:42 PM AEST
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| There is a beauty in these words. Under the pain and passion I see wisdom. Keep up the good writing. Keep your chin up |
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Re: Dead Inside
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by spooky on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 09:36:56 PM AEST
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| I've written about poets,,who think its not good enough,,wrong what you write is special in minds and with wisdom,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Dead Inside
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 11:14:15 PM AEST
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Good job I thought it was!
Dont be so hard on yourself You have talent,its your very own! Christina |
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