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influx
Contributed by
Blue
on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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on the train tracks we sipped sweet wine
forever to be lost in time
suicide dances in the middle of the street
you kiss my lips and feel my pain
in pretty dresses small girls waltz
forever lost the minute that we die
blood drips from cuts in dark brown eyes
what i was three years ago
how far i've gotten to reach this point
influx of experiences shaping my soul
forever and ever until these streets crack
we shall die happy soldiers in a war we call life
Copyright ©
Blue
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2003-05-02 14:35:00]
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Re: influx
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 03:35:06 PM AEST
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| this is absolutely stunning...i love it...wow...this is amazing... |
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Re: influx
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by AngryPrincess on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 08:04:26 PM AEST
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very very good poem Blue...i really liked this one...sad, but i know where the feelings stem from...
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Re: influx
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 10:49:05 PM AEST
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Very good... very sad indeed.
suicide dances in the middle of the street
you kiss my lips and feel my pain
Loved those 2 lines... Keep on writing.
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