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Until the End
Contributed by
JamesHowlett
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Until the End
JamesHowlett
You come in sorrow
You come in pain
You come to borrow
You come in shame
Youre here to cry
To let your insides die
I want you to let you know
Im here
I wont go
Dont fear
Ill be a bucket for your tears
A basket for your cries
Ill take away your fears
Ill look deep into your eyes
Feel no shame
Let me take your pain
Feel free to cry
Just look me in the eye
So much past
So little known
I forge a new mask
One that can be shown
Ill always be here for you
Youre my friend
Theres nothing you can do
Ill be here till the end
Ill look deep in your eyes
Ill steal your pain
Ill listen to your cries
Ill take away your shame
I wish I could show you
How I feel inside
But theres nothing I can do
Except look deep into your eyes
Let me take your pain
It doesnt deserve you
Let me take your pain
He doesnt deserve you
Your thoughts, your mind
Your heart, your smile
He doesnt take the time
To just stop and make you smile
Ill feed you strength
Ill take your pain
I expect no thanks
Only your pain
Let me keep it locked inside
Ill always stay your friend
I only wish to look deep into your eyes
And see you happy, until the end.
Copyright ©
JamesHowlett
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2003-05-02 16:05:00]
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Re: Until the End
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 05:12:24 PM AEST
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This is so very sweet and thoughtful of you, James...
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Re: Until the End
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by shelby on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:20:50 PM AEST
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So touching. You show in this poem the word friendship!! A person is blessed to have you as a friend.
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Re: Until the End
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by Dot on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:36:36 PM AEST
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| This is a look into your very soul, my friend. Lovely words and sentiment. A lucky friend, indeed. Dot |
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Re: Until the End
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 09:59:54 PM AEST
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| You must be an incredible friend. The friend in your poem is very lucky to have you, I hope you can tell this friend how you feel the way you have told so many of us. You define what it is to be a friend. If only all of us were lucky enough to have a friend like you. Dylan |
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Re: Until the End
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 01:42:43 AM AEST
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| He is a great friend. He is so insperational, and i love him. THanks for everything, your my best friend!! |
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Re: Until the End
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by mckayla on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 01:22:56 AM AEST
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beautiful write!
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