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The Rose
Contributed by
hansond83
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Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 03:44:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Beyond the river, upon a hill
Grows a wild rose
If I will ever reach this flower
Heaven only knows
The hill is high, the river wide
There is much that stands between
The rose that grows upon the hill
The most beautiful I've seen
It may have some thorns and withered leaves
But this I know for sure
The lust I feel to hold this rose
Is nothing else but pure
I know the river could drown my soul
And the hill is infinately high
But I will risk it all to make
This lovely flower mine
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2011-12-02 15:44:07]
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Re: The Rose
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 04:39:06 PM AEST
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Another good write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: The Rose
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by NightOwl61 on
Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 08:18:15 PM AEST
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| This is an enjoyable read. Has a wonderfully fluid flow. tfs |
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Re: The Rose
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by doug on
Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 06:22:56 PM AEST
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| Nice. I like the flow of your words. To me bad flow kills a poem even where the word choice is good. To long for that one beauty... don't we all know that feeling all to well. I hope you get your rose. Truly , Doug |
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