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Muddy Puddle!
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 07:11:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Squirming around
Low to the ground
Entwined in the game
They all are the same
Heads or tails
Knotted entrails
Telling them apart
Is a definite art
Like worms they are
The slimiest by far
Just why are they here
I must disappear
From the game they play
Every night and day
Guessing your business
Thought and tact they do miss
Leave me alone
Let me thrive on my own
Never was one of you
I see a broader view
Humans or worms
With their wriggles and squirms
But when the puddle freezes
Move on for new squeezes
Its all a joke, its all a game
Just another, just the same
They know who they are
Too many lies so far
But youre still my star
I will love you from afar.
Copyright ©
Unaekseveer1
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2002-08-04 07:11:05]
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Re: Muddy Puddle!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 04:26:34 AM AEST
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Dean, I really like this poem, I think that it is really good. And I can also relate, I know many poepl whom are like that.
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Re: Muddy Puddle!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 09:19:47 AM AEST
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It's such a shame Cancice,
I think everyone seems to know many people like this! Why are there so many, I often ask myself!
Hello, and I'm pleased you like.
With love
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Re: Muddy Puddle!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 09:30:31 AM AEST
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Dean, I don't know why there are so many people like this. It is just awful that there are so many.
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