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A Few Memories
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
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Of all I've heard, of all I've seen
I have a few memeories
They stand out so prominently
Like when you abandoned me
I can still see your back, so straight and tall
Proud of absolutely nothing at all
Listening to me plead and bawl
You lifted me up, only to let me fall
Then i remember your turn, one last stand
I remember you facing me, the gun in your hand
Looking no longer remotely like a man
I remember you pulling the trigger
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2003-05-02 18:05:00]
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Re: A Few Memories
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 01:06:26 AM AEST
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| hehe.....since no one has comented on this one yet i thought it would be appropriate for me to be the first! hehe.....i love it! i love all of your poems! do be do be do wa wa. i love you! :-) |
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