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Night's Fallen
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 01:27:47 AM in AEST
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From distant pass ...my heart does hear...
a lovely sound... that fast grows near,
Cascading down ...the rocks again...
these fragile thoughts... that seek a friend,
they tumble through... dark night's abyss,
the mist dispersed... by lover's kiss,
a broken frame... a hollow fist,
a fragile grasp on falling cliffs,
love drifts my way... a broken sound,
where nay a whisper... can be found,
these rocks lay strewn... upon the ground,
but they did land... without a sound,
this looming wall... was never there...
a haunting whisper..... in the air...
for hearts of those ... who never weep,
can capture still... a true love's beat,
The rocks they fall... and lovers die,
but in the end... night's fallen fly.
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deusdeira
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2011-12-06 01:27:47]
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Re: Night's Fallen
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 10:05:31 AM AEST
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Nice rhyming scheme and don't
worry about rocks falling anymore.
According to Al Gore, Global
Warming will soon turn all our
rocks into Sea Shells! Smiles!
Rob |
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