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Cry
Contributed by
Abby
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Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 08:02:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It's a shame how much I can cry.
The tears never stop, my eyes are never dry.
I walk this stance that people think it's "me."
Little do they know, I'm always trapped inside,
Never able to be free.
Why should I hide the fact that
I don't know how it feels to be happy
While people smile, I just give that same expression back.
To act someone other than myself, is what I'm used to.
Being sad all the time is hard, but there's nothing left that I can do.
Copyright ©
Abby
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2011-12-06 08:02:10]
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Re: Cry
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 09:47:45 AM AEST
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Ah Abby,
I got a poem on my site ya ought to read called, Let Folks Know so's ya read my line, "positive out brings positive in". Good capture of cryin'. All ya gotta do is git a good capture of smilin', laughin' 'n' lightheartedness. Write it 'n' live it dear, Abby. Hey! Do you have a love advice column?
wabl
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Re: Cry
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by Butterflyperfect on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 03:16:27 PM AEST
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You have captured sadness well in this poem.
Very much can I relate to these feelings as I can imagine many others can too.
Thanks for sharing!
Hold your head high
captivate the sky
Be who you were meant to be
Don't worry about what others want to see
One of a kind
A precious find
That's who you are
Truly a star
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Re: Cry
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by funmi on
Thursday, 8th December 2011 @ 06:36:36 AM AEST
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| Made me nearly cry, because i can relate, its beautiful |
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