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They Just Watch
Contributed by
lovelyredd
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Wednesday, 7th December 2011 @ 04:16:53 PM in AEST
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No one knows the pain you feel
or why you feel
and how you feel.
They just watch
You sit alone and they don't care
They just watch
Your yellow turns to grey
Each day , the same ole day
No one knows the pain you feel
or why you feel
and how you feel.
They just watch..
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lovelyredd
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2011-12-07 16:16:53]
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Re: They Just Watch
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2011 @ 05:06:44 PM AEST
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Awesome write.
Good job.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: They Just Watch
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by funmi on
Thursday, 8th December 2011 @ 06:24:16 AM AEST
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| captivating, Would Have Loved it to be longer, but that adds to the whole effect.. lovely |
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