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ENOUGH
Contributed by
Shabby
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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WHEN IS ENOUGH ENOUGH? HOW DO YOU KNOW? IS IT WHEN YOU HAVE CRIED SO MANY TEARS EVEN AN OCEAN WOULD OVERFLOW?
OR IS IT WHEN EVERY LAST DROP OF FEELING HAS BEEN DRAINED AND NOTHING BUT AN EMPTY BROKEN SHELL REMAINS?
COULD IT BE WHEN YOUR HEART FEELS NOTHING ANYMORE? WHEN ALL YOU HEAR ARE SLAMMING DOORS
OR MAYBE ITS ONE MORE REJECTION ONE MORE LOSS ONE MORE DISSAPPOINTMENT AND REALIZING WHAT IT ALL HAS COSTS
MAYBE ITS ONE MORE CLAP OF THUNDER OR RAIN CLOUD OR YOUR HEART BEGGING FOR MERCY OUTLOUD
MAYBE ITS NEVER ENOUGH TIL ATLAST WERE DEAD WHEN FINALLY WERE STILL NO MORE THOUGHTS RUSHING THROUGH OUR HEAD
ALL I KNOW IS ITS TOUGH WHEN IT NEVER SEEMS THAT ENOUGH IS ENOUGH
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Shabby
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2003-05-02 22:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ENOUGH
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 04:31:17 PM AEST (User
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You just told it all right here!! I said this very same thing the other morning, well I yelled it ENOUGH
ALREADY!!!!! GEEZZZZZZZZZZZ
You did a great job on this!!
Michelle |
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Re: ENOUGH
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shabby on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:04:21 AM AEST (User
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read my poem and commenting...wasn't sure what kind of responses my writing would get...I'm new to the game and was really nervous. |
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