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DYING
Contributed by
Shabby
on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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IM DYING INSIDE CANT ANYBODY SEE DOES ANYONE CARE WHATS HAPPENING TO ME
GOD PLEASE TELL ME HOW THIS HAPPENED
I DID EVERYTHING EXPECTED I PLAYED BY THE RULES I WAS ALWAYS THE ONE WHO CURED EVERYBODY ELSES BLUES
WHATS GONNA HAPPEN WHEN MY LIGHT BURNS OUT OH MY GOD DOESNT ANYBODY HEAR MY SOUL SHOUTING OUT
BURNING SENSATIONS SEARING MY HEART A SENSE OF URGENCY BUILDING
FEELING MY LIFE FORCE SUFFERING FROM THE DESPAIR MY BODY IS YEILDING
SOMEBODY HELP ME NOW IM BEGGING RAISE ME OUT OF THIS SINKING BOAT
SOMEBODY, ANYBODY TAKE MY HAND AND HELP ME STAY AFLOAT
IM JUST GONNA CLOSE MY EYES AND GO TO SLEEP WONDERING WHY I CANT WEEP
NO EMOTIONS LEFT NO TEARS TO CRY CAN ANYBODY SAVE ME BEFORE I LET MYSELF DIE
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Shabby
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2003-05-02 22:45:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: DYING
(User Rating: 1 ) by nightrider on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 10:20:52 PM AEST (User
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this is so amazing... so true... you write really well, you have expressed some things ive been trying to for awhile... well done |
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Re: DYING
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shabby on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:01:26 AM AEST (User
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Thank you so much for your comment...I'm new to the site and it's the first time i've ever posted my poetry... |
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