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The only one there
Contributed by
ChaelaDark
on
Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 05:29:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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A nuclear bomb sends waves away
Just for them to come back
is what Preast said
Now I wonder how much of you
is still there
Did your heart ever beat for me?
so much anger in me
I could rip you apart
and laughing as you
tried to gather
up your flesh
in shreds around you
These arms that once
excepted you with kindness
have the intent to kill
I stand here
so confused
wondering where to go from here
I thought we were one
but you let another one in
one I thought was MY friend
you showed me that I have no one
to trust
Remember the cards?
we would work in tragedy
well here is your tragedy
I lay under a blackened sky
split down the middle
while crows as dark as night
feast on my heart and soul
Demons twist my mind around
love one minute, rage the next
I was there when our fists met e/o flesh
I was there when words of hate spit forth
from your hell mouth
I was there
I was there
I was there
I was the only ***** one there!
weeks go by and no showers
I still held you
Gabriel died
I held you
wiping tears till you fell asleep
Azreal died, I wrote you every hour
to make sure your heart still beat
I loved you
with every ounce of my being and more
but now you look at me
as if Im dried and disposable
just remember you selfish *****
I was the only one there
Copyright ©
ChaelaDark
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2011-12-09 17:29:28]
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Re: The only one there
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 05:37:13 PM AEST
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Reilly great writing.
I could never understand The best friend thing.
That really happens a lot and I'm sure they will be doing that long after we're gone.
You captured your subject well.
Hang tuff, blessings, huggs,
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Re: The only one there
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by shelby on
Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 07:58:38 PM AEST
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I felt each emotion in this write. I am sorry this happened and that your heart is broken.
Keep writing, it is good medicine. Yea the best friend thing, I get it and it is such BS.
They do not deserve you, remember that!
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