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Wind through the trees
Contributed by
Ellewood
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Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 12:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I look out my window and what do I see branches being blown by the wind beckoning to me
Come out come see the wind wants you to be free
The wind will fly you up high high enough to reach the sky to a place high above where there is only pure love right to heavens door where at last you will feel pain no more
Come on the branches call out why must there be any doubt dont you want to leave be free of this place for what you give here only goes to waste
Okay I said at last the time has come to flee my sad past I will go will go with the wind and fly right along for finally I know where I truly belong
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Re: Wind through the trees
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 12:54:36 PM AEST (User
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I often write about the wind and the sea and this is truly beautiful. |
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Re: Wind through the trees
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 02:39:13 PM AEST (User
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Very beautiful, magic words.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Wind through the trees
(User Rating: 1 ) by aliopterix on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 07:04:54 PM AEST (User
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Such beautiful imagery. I am transported aloft, my mind, in truth a vessel dancing along on your words of wonder. Thank you for sharing - Aliopterix |
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Re: Wind through the trees
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 07:56:39 PM AEST (User
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Paint the picture beautiful and everyone will wanna go there. Includin' you. Another script yer own life message. Lovely one. Kudos
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Re: Wind through the trees
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tracy on
Tuesday, 17th January 2012 @ 10:34:09 AM AEST (User
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"I look out my window
and what do I see
branches being blown by the wind
beckoning to me
Come out
come see
the wind wants you to be free"
I really like how you have made the trees come alive. I can feel the wind and see the branches gesturing for me to come out and fly. :)
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