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AMANDA MEAN
Contributed by
maverick47
on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 03:01:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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She could penetrate a suit of armor
if inside beat a heart to crush.
The men she kissed savored her venom
unable to halt the liquification of their soul
She calculates, possesses and destroys, leaving
stagnant dust, then watering her victims'' gardens
with adrenalin scented embalming fluid.
Her quickness and stealth allow entry like a breeze
snaking between the dangling charms of a wind chime,
Selling a deadly melody that renders her prey senseless,
attempting to identify their curdled stimulation.
In an instant all that was sane is foreign and incomprehensibly
spun into a trophy on the mantle of Amandas'' ego
awaiting the adornment of ashen cobwebs.
Copyright ©
maverick47
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2011-12-10 15:01:03]
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Re: AMANDA MEAN
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 03:14:47 PM AEST
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Alas, I know her well! But she
used the aka of Mary at the time!
Great Insight.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns
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Re: AMANDA MEAN
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by aliopterix on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 07:18:40 PM AEST
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| Wow! - Look out! Great read, the words are a tour de force. Emotive read, Thank you, Aliopterix. |
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Re: AMANDA MEAN
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 07:42:59 PM AEST
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Sounds like a composite of my first two ex-wives. I already dated Amanda Mean!!!! Twice. No, I ain't a fool. Ya described their temptuous ways. Cross between temptin' 'n' sensuous. I know temptuous aint' a word but it should be ... fer ex-wives 'n' new dates. Enjoyed the read.
wabl
KenMoore
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