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I Need Your Help
Contributed by
angelus8663
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Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 04:57:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tell me what to do, tell me what to say,
I could almost drop to my knees and pray.
I need advice from people out there,
My feelings exposed in the worlds bright glare.
I want to tell a story, about the girl that I love,
I could almost swear she was sent from above.
The thing is, and this will make you wince,
She left years ago, and I havent seen her since.
We were friends for years, we even shared a home,
But now that shes gone, I just live alone.
My godsons her child, with another man,
As a mum, Im her number one fan.
We fell out over something stupid, I take all the blame,
I made the wrong choice and it fanned the flame.
She hated my girlfriend, she turned out to be right,
It went from an argument to a full blown fight.
She left soon after, moved far away,
And I still regret it, to this very day.
We speak now and then, over the phone,
When the chat is over, I feel empty and alone.
So what should I do? Move on with my life?
Accept that she will never love me the same, or be my wife.
Or should I fight for her? as I should have done then,
If need to make a choice, if not now, then when?
So I appeal to you all, asking for your wisdom,
Is there still hope, or is the relationship done.
Please comment below and say what you feel,
Either way, its the first step for me to heal.
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Re: I Need Your Help
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by Ellewood on
Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 07:21:04 AM AEST
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| I think--no I know life is way too short for what ifs. The only way for you to move on is to tell her how you feel. she may surprise you-if she doesn't feel the same ,yes it will hurt ,but at least you will know what to take at that time. Good luck ! |
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Re: I Need Your Help
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by GREAT-WHITE on
Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 08:28:48 AM AEST
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| very good poem. tell her how you trully feel and if nothing comes good out of that its not ment to be. then you can worry about bettering yourself |
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Re: I Need Your Help
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 11:11:03 PM AEST
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| I agree with Ellewood & Great-White. You need to tell her how you feel. Message me if you need to talk. Take care, Tim |
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