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His
Contributed by
lovelyredd
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Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 09:00:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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His hands are smooth
Like the skin of a newborn baby
His kiss is soft
Like a touch of an angel
His eyes are sincere
Like a lecture from my dad
His body is a blessing
Like a gift from God
His walk is confident
Like a man of true honor
His heart is pure
Like a virgin waiting
His love is divine
Like our connection
His touch is sweet
Like cotton candy
His time is mine
Like mine is his
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Re: His
(User Rating: 1 )
by clae-marie on
Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 02:24:02 PM AEST
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| i love this poem, & all the comparisons |
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Re: His
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by poeticjestix on
Saturday, 17th December 2011 @ 03:26:13 PM AEST
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| This is almost brilliant. The last four lines don't seem quite as strong as the rest. |
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