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Septamber 19th 2006
Contributed by
live_to_love
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Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 05:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He says he's had enough She begs him to please stay says she'll do better promises she'll change but he knows her all to well he's fallen for her games she'd say she'll sober up and as she says it she's shooting up this time he's gonna leave her he's finally made up his mind he ain't coming back this time by now she's so doped up she don't even see him leave he glances back at her trying not to cry now he's in the hospital his mamma's by his side he asks her "why'd she have to die" his mamma just watches as he slowly dies trying not to cry
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Re: Septamber 19th 2006
(User Rating: 1 ) by angelus8663 on
Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 01:16:33 AM AEST (User
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a very nice emotive poem, well written and a nice flow. well done |
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